Testimonials from Past Clients

From Yang at Columbia University –

In order to get into your dream school, you need both competence and luck. Fat Envelope can’t change your competence, but they can improve your luck. They know how to make you a more attractive candidate by efficiently highlighting important and valuable information through your documents.

When I was applying for PhD programs, they were a great help on my personal statement. They suggested a framework for the essay, the order and flow of my ideas, areas that should and should not be emphasized, the tone, and generally how to communicate with the committee members through the statement.

From Anonymous at the University of Pennsylvania –

Fat Envelope helped me with two rounds of edits for six essays each. They not only helped me see the big picture and fit the pieces together, but were also experts on small details such as diction and grammar. After we finished, the essays flowed much better, had a clear sense of direction, and communicated precisely what I was trying to say.

Fat Envelope provided me with some of the best constructive criticism that I’ve ever received and really helped me hone in on what I was trying to express to the admissions committee. With their help, my essays became more focused as well as more expressive at the same time.

From Ning at the University of Massachusetts –

After my consultant’s revisions, my application progressed significantly and it didn’t take much back-and-forth communication between us before my essays were strong, my resume was eye-catching, and my overall package was more competitive.

She was extremely knowledgeable about how the admission process worked; both the qualities that admission panels are looking for and presenting myself in my applications to make a difference in the competitive applicant pool of so many highly qualified candidates.